1.It is possible to overuse the well-turned fragment (and Kellerman sometimes does) , but frags can also work beautifully to streamline narration, create clear images, and create tension as well as to vary the prose-line.

这种精练语很容易被滥（凯勒曼有这么做），但语同样可漂亮，让叙述紧凑，塑造出清晰的形象，产生张力，还可使句型丰富多变。